the stranger who felt rather beautiful

i closed my eyes, in wonder
peeking within my imagination
so as to decide, what is it really
my love, that i seem to find the most beautiful

was it the sunset sky?
or was it where the land and water met, at a stretch?

until oh my love, my eyes stumbled upon the thought of you

and the words that you write

realizing how it all begins, only when i’d feel you beside me

under the same sky, walking against the; path of the breeze

caring not for where i’m, but only for the jewel, next to me
that oh i’ll let no tide, drift away


oh how my love, you seem to adorn
all that you visit;
all that you gaze at;
all that you hold.

oh how i seem to have felt, the sweetness in you
along with the wisdom and innocence

that you no longer have to carry

for these words, that i write today
will sketch all that and more

that maybe,
only i could see.

oh how my love, i seem to have lost myself

as your rosey lips, smiled at me

on the day, when the dark skies in this city of mine

and oh your eyes; looked it’s prettiest

with colors oh my love,

that you gave birth to

on the day, you wore that white dress

only to whisper shyly; looking into mine

‘i do.’

well, i stumbled upon this lady, who just felt rather warm and sweet. there was just something about her, that felt rather beautiful to me.

this heart of mine, couldn’t resist, but write for her

i wrote whatever that came to me, as i closed my eyes and thought of her

unfiltered; raw

for you. :)

with love





66 comments

  1. Sonu · April 4

    wow those words are lovely..

    Liked by 1 person

    • srijan · April 5

      thank you so much, mate :)

      Like

  2. Beautiful!

    Liked by 1 person

  3. april9900 · April 5

    Beautiful yes? Of course Yes!

    Like

    • srijan · April 5

      thank you.

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  4. adventurerspeaking · April 5

    I lovee 💕

    Liked by 1 person

  5. Angelo Guan · April 6

    I f* love this!
    Thank you for this!

    Liked by 1 person

    • srijan · April 6

      thank you.

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  6. rekhaid · April 6

    Amazing!! I could relate as this white dress made me nostalgic about my own love story..hahaha…good work dear… Keep it up!

    Liked by 1 person

    • srijan · April 6

      thank you so much :)

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  7. Beautiful

    Liked by 2 people

    • srijan · April 6

      thank you.

      Like

  8. Alejandro De La Garza · April 10

    I love and truly appreciate this kind of poetry – passionate and invigorating.

    Liked by 1 person

  9. Tatiana · April 17

    How nice! 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

  10. Edhie · April 20

    Beautiful and raw.

    Liked by 2 people

  11. House of Heart · April 20

    Beautiful, passionate, captivating, beyond words!

    Liked by 3 people

  12. Susan · April 21

    Beautiful!

    Liked by 3 people

  13. joyfulpilgrim11 · April 21

    Poignant, powerful and loving. Thank you

    Liked by 1 person

    • srijan · April 24

      thankyou so much.

      Like

  14. Priyanka · May 27

    on the day, you wore that white dress

    only to whisper shyly; looking into mine
    Lovely your way of expressing ..

    Liked by 3 people

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  17. THECOZYCHIC · 9 Days Ago

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